Literally, it's the text you see when you use the 'look' command on an
object, room, or particularly character (the name comes from the TinyMUD
command to set it: @describe). However, to a MUD character,
a desc is everything that wardrobe, hairstyle, body language, and
car model is to a RL person, and more, all summed up in (hopefully) one
paragraph of English text. Encompassing as it does every visible
aspect of the character besides their deliberate actions, a desc is
a very important part of an RPMUD character. On true social MUDs, this
is not such a big deal, since everyone is presumed to be more or less
like their RL self regardless of what their desc says, but everyone
likes to look nice.
In theory, writing a desc is easy: you just write down what your
character looks like. In practice, well, it must still be pretty easy since
I can do it, but doing it well is more of a trick than it might
first appear. The Ten
Commandments of Descing list several important things to do, and more
importantly, to avoid. (Personally, I think Fire's length limit is too
generous: descs should be no more than 8-10 lines, with perhaps a special
exemption to 12 if you really thoroughly fail to suck. Since (through the
magic of exponential growth) almost all MUDders belong to the recent
generation that considers 2-3 page descs a standard, this makes me a
reactionary old curMUDgeon. No surprise there.) Once you have the rules of
style down, the problem reduces to capturing the essence of your character
as well as possible in the limited space. No problem. Just ask any
Since ideas come to me rarely and infrequently, I try to milk them for
all they're worth, so that every few weeks I'll give everyone I know
a desc based on my latest theme. The most notable themes I've used
are presented here in vaguely chronological order, with a few of the
least embarrassing examples from each.
Scholarly Notes on Spirits
- CHRIS: one of the legendary Hundred Masters of the Imaginary Kingdoms.
Commonly depicted as a man with an absurdly long brown braid and the
claws of a tiger, and always shown with musicians is attendance. His
characteristic element is aether, and his card is the Zero of Rainbows.
(There is some evidence that this is the spirit referred to as Kumiko
by the former inhabitants of the Sunken Isles, and as IronThoughts by
the people of the Animal Empire.)
- CHRISBER: a minor spirit of knowledge, revered by the inhabitants of North
California. Commonly depicted as a slight man with a beaky nose, black hair,
and the wings of an ibis, wearing a suit jacket and a white linen kilt in the
Egyptian style. His magical tools are round-lensed spectacles engraved with
the Eye of Horus, a clock escapement, and a turkey-quill pen. His particular
sphere of influence is small mechanisms, his characteristic element is brass,
and his card is the Seven of Books.
Netcom Internet Abuse Squad
These descs were actually worn on the Netcom internal MUD, I believe.
Alas, I don't think any customers ever saw them.
- Actinic sparks shower from the whip-crack, spattering off curves of
black armor, leaving glowing pockmarks in the bystanders. Skate wheels screech
as she slides to a stop, tracks glowing red-hot behind her. Amber text flows
across the blank faceplate, documenting crimes too heinous to be spoken aloud.
One red-gloved hand flips up the visor, revealing brown eyes in a smirking
face. "Officer Marith, Abusers Squad. You're under arrest."
- The rumbling sound in the distance resolves into the growl of a
grotesquely over-powered engine. Dim red headlights cast beams of heat through
the writhing smoke, suggesting oncoming doom without illuminating its shape.
The engine roar redoubles as the car rounds a corner, rattling the bricks in
their mortar. Spiked tires claw sparking gaps in the pavement as the looming
beweaponed shape grinds to a halt not an inch too soon. The top hatch slams
open and out pops a brown face with glinting brown eyes, and brown hair tucked
messily under an officer's cap. "Apprentice Ayse, Abusers Squad!" The
inch-wide muzzle of her sidearm swings to bear, gaping beneath the red eye of
the laser sight. "You're under arrest!"
- With a roar of turbines and screech of spiked tires, the bike swerves around
the burning wreckage of a twenty-line .signature and into plain view, sliding
to a halt at the end of three red-hot grooves in the magnetic pavement. Red
light flickers on curves of black leather and fairing of black ceramic,
lighting them to the color of ancient blood and the trailling banner of hair
to scarlet flame. The multi-barreled cannon mounted in the side car tracks
with the rider's swivelling helmet, showing the name "CANCELBOT" stenciled on
the barrel shroud before it swings to bear. One metal-gloved hand flips up the
faceplace, revealing hard hazel eyes in a smirking face. "Officer Teleute,
Abusers Squad. Log out or die."
- A black greatcoat billows like wings behind a slim figure briefly robed
in clinging black, and gloved and stockinged in lace like the shadows
of dead twigs on snow. Her oval face is serene and unreadable behind
round copper lenses graven with the two faces of a penny, and her short
black hair feathers out on the same impalpable wind that swirls her
coat. A silver ankh lurks gleaming between her breasts, and in her
left hand she wields a pair of scissors reversed like a dagger.
- The immaculate white of Paradise still stains her delicate skin and the
scraps of raiment wrapped 'round her bosom and loins, but her wings
flash the blue-green of living worlds, with a wide-open eye on every
feather, and her streaming mane burns gold as a sun. The black of
clinkered sin streaks her slender bare legs, and a shattered silver fetter
trails from every delicate wrist. Smooth silver-violet metal shields
mortal eyes from full sight of her face, revealing only eyes like stars,
and a mouth of ruby and ivory.
These will only make sense if you play ShadowFist, or at least
- T.Rev: Yeti Mastermind / Fighting: 1 / Costs: [Jam][Tech] 2 /
Provides: [Jam][Chi] / Text: Unique. Toughness: 1. Turn T.Rev and
pay twice play cost of target card to cancel and smoke any [Asc]
State, Event, or Site as it is being played. This effect may not be
used on cards already in play. _T.Rev is a tireless opponent of the
Conspiracy._ / Art: Against a background of snowy peaks, a huge shaggy
blond Yeti sits at a folding card table by the edge of a cliff. The
ground just where his opponent would be sitting has crumbled away into
chasm, leaving only a few speed lines pointing downward. The Yeti is not
- Chris: Resourceful Sysadmin / Fighting: 1 / Cost: [MUD][Tech] /
Provides: [MUD][MUD][Tech] / Text: Chris's controller may play
[MUD] and Virtual sites from his smoked pile. If Chris is smoked, he
returns to his owner's hand. _If you've got the database, he's got the
site._ / Art: A large black leather chair, facing away from the viewer
and towards a desk with an imposing pile of computer equipment,
surrounded by imposing piles of audio equipment, stacks of CDs, and
piles of books. Nothing can be seen of the chair's occupant except for
an immensely long brown braid tossed over the back and trailing across
Running on Hawkwind / Virtual State / Cost: [MUD][MUD] 2 / Text:
Play only on a [MUD] or Virtual site. Subject site cannot be burned,
and returns to owner's hand if smoked. / Art: An innocuous-looking
workstation, sitting on a desk surrounded by high-piled CDs.
These will only make sense if you play XXXenophile, but may be amusing
without making sense.
- Nine / Modern * Sysadmin * Enigma / 9 / Art: An exceedingly fit and
sleekly handsome young man lies sprawled on a chaise longue, his smooth
brown skin bare and his long black hair trailing damply. Although he
appears quite exhausted, his expression can only be described as smug.
On couches, divans, and cushions around him are an assortment of
beautiful young women, strapping young lads, and fuzzy young animals,
all equally exhausted. On a stage in the background, the judges are
holding up big cards each bearing the numeral 9. / Artist: Phil Foglio
/ Text: Pop any combination of characters whose values sum to exactly
- Desert Radio / Future * Alien * Vegetable / 7 / Art: A strange
plant lurks ominously in a heavy stone planter that apparently trundles
about on tank-like treads. The plant is tree-high, and has a strong
central stalk, but sports viny tendrils with large valentine-shaped
leaves on the upper portions; several stalks with curiously human eyes
bobbing at the tips; and several large flowers with strong fleshy
petals, some closed into pastel orange spikes and some opened out into
shocking pink receptacles. Several peculiar devices are strapped to the
base of the trunk, some apparently shaped for mammalian anatomy. /
Artist: Phil Foglio / Text: Pop one Vegetable
The Implausible Bestiary, 2nd Ed.
- Samammish Feathered Serpent: A medium-sized, warm-blooded predator
of TooMUSH and the Pacific Northwest, famed for the pastel iridescence
of its steel-hard scales and flamboyant plumage, and the deadly venom
of its extensible fangs. Adult specimens can reach lengths of nearly
two meters, weigh up to fifty kilograms, and can spring three to five
times their own length. Commonly found in software labs and other
well-connected places, where they prey upon Windows developers and
soccer players. Mating habits are obscure, if they exist at all; some
authorities hold that the young are hatched from soccer balls.
--_Implausible Bestiary_, 2nd Ed.
- Crested Meefling Lizard: This rare migratory creature can be found
from coast to coast of North America, as well as some parts of Northern
Europe. It may be distinguished from other lizards of similar size by
its attraction to antiquated books, spiny copper-colored crest, and
unique cry of 'meefle!'. The crested meefling lizard normally lairs
under rocks in pools of warm water, despite its diet of chihuahuas and
mint ice cream. It apparently has no trouble breeding. --_Implausible
Bestiary_, 2nd Ed.
- Snider's Olive Grass-Bounder: This peaceable intermittent herbivore
can be often be found leaping and stotting across the American midwest
and southwest, or sitting quietly in small fashionable coffeeshops.
Although its fuzzy olive-brown pelt, large innocent eyes, and short
blunt black horns make the grass-bounder a tempting target for
predators, it can deliver a fierce kick with its shiny hooves, or even
run down enemies (if its knees don't give out). The mating habits of
the grass-bounder are a popular topic among younger researchers.
--_Implausible Bestiary_, 2nd Ed.
Yet more CCG-based descs. For reasons too complicated to go into
here, they've been put on a separate
Other People's AmberMUSH Characters
These are only partially my work; I wrote some clothing descriptions
to go with already-existing characters desced by someone else. If you
can't tell where the dividing line is, presume the good parts come
from the characters' players.
I wrote approximately a zillion descs for Raoul, who was something
of a clotheshorse. These are the ones Chris still remembered after
a couple of years.
- Raoul (played by Chris)
- His form is sheathed in dark green marble, shot through with veins of
rust-red that jut above the surface in jagged crystals, statue-smooth,
intricately-jointed, and sculpted closely to his lean frame. Over the
face, the green is etched away, leaving a web of rust crystals for
protection and shadows, and a plume of green feathers edged in ragged
rust stands out behind the smooth curve of the helmet.
- Faceless and nameless in armor grey and charcoal as a dragon-borne
storm, the plates and scales outlined in lightning. The surcoat and
cloak are darker, distant sheet lightning behind glowering thunderheads
in patterns that might be a crest and might be chance. Brightest of all
is the plume of St Elmo's fire trailing down behind the helm, dripping
sparks like burning water.
- Andrea (played by Ayse)
- Taller than average, lithe and proud, with long legs and fragile grace
that shows even through the glittering ice that sheaths her from crown
to toe. Golden sun and dusky sky sparkle in the depths of the crystal
plates and gleam wickedly from the points and edges. Blue eyes gleam
coldly behind the golden gargoyle mask of her helmet, and a line of
shining blue spikes forms the crest.
- Una (played by Chrisber)
- A young woman with short brown, curly hair. Her mouth smiles easily,
but with a touch of cruelty, and there is a matching glint in her brown
eyes. She carries herself like a dancer, gracefully and well-balanced.
Her knee-length red robe is printed with white roses, and tightly belted
with a white sash 'round her narrow waist. The weight of the fine metal
rings between the layers of heavy silk drapes the robe to her slender,
muscled body, and the glossy black leggings beneath cling to the carved
lines of her calves. Thrust through the sash is a narrow black-lacquered
scabbard bearing a basket-hilted sword.
- Janier (played by Ayse)
- She stands delicate and graceful as a bird with plumage of moonlight,
dainty head cocked and green eyes brighter than stars. Her face and
hands are birdlike too, bones prominent under smooth translucent skin,
marred only by a bone-white scar across her right palm. Wings of lunar
silk billow fluttering behind her, hue identical to the streaming
banner of her hair. Two joined silver hoops hang from her left ear.
My Own AmberMUSH Characters
I played Sabriamillian for part of one plotline, played Tané off and
on as my main character, and finally gave up on Amber before actually
- She's tall, her height exaggerated by the space between feet and
ground, and slender as a swordblade without missing a single curve.
Violet hair streams out behind her in a banner as iridescent as martin
feathers, and no more conscious of gravity, and violet eyes glow from
her white-rose face. Her clothes are moonlight glossy as silk:
close-fitting jacket frogged and trimmed with braided gold, skin-tight
breeches, and long epauleted overcoat. The coat and jacket leave her
arms bare, pink against the pure silver-white, but lacy moonlight
trails from fingertips almost to elbows.
- Poets have ever compared the beauty of women to that of flowers,
but never has it been more true. Her smooth skin is tinted with the hue
of living leaves, and her pale hair is not just strewn with flowers but
made of them, hundreds of vermillion-spotted white blossoms spilling
down her back. Even what seem to be a brief vest and skirt of silk dyed
to match her hair are enormous petals sprouting from behind her
shoulders and waist and curling around her comely form. Those details
aside, she looks remarkably human, although no taller than a child and
with enormous eyes of the same vermillion that spots her petals.
- Her face is pale and calm, narrow-chinned and delicate-featured, capped
by short platinum hair so fine it feathers out on any draft, striking
iridescent sparks from the violet patch before her left ear. Her eyes
are likewise iridescent and violet, shimmering between faintly narrowed
lids. She is of no more than middling height, slim-shouldered and
slim-hipped, but feminine nevertheless. Her jacket of snowy satin is
oversized and puff-sleeved, slashed to show violet silk within and
decorated with white silk lacings and ribbons. Her equally white hose
are sleekly unadorned except for a violet ribbon down the outside of
her right leg. A violet sash slung across her hips supports a
basket-hilted rapier in a plain white scabbard.
The Crypt of St Leviathan
These descs have also been moved to another
page in the interests of organization.
In no particular order, chronological or otherwise. T.Rev is
responsible for the pun in the third entry, but all other atrocities
- An octet of sapphire-blue cybernetic limbs spread out in a four-meter
starburst, framing her upper body like an ivory statue. The line between flesh
and ceramic falls sharp at her hips: above, she could almost be human, though
more perfect of face and form than chance would provide; below, all sleek
spidery legs and smooth mechanical joints. The long amber eyes, above her
smiling features, might be Asian, though a Western artist must have dreamed
those pale, opulent curves. Hand-sized golden spiders continually braid and
rebraid the trailing raven banner of her hair, keeping it floating free of
tangles or snags.
- It's Cera Cerium, heroine of the Pleiades Rangers! She looks just like she
does in the newsreels: tall and lithe, smooth olive skin bronzed and
close-cropped copper hair gilded by alien suns, oval faced banded with a pale
raccoon-mask of goggle marks around her viridescent eyes. Under a battered
leather bombadier's jacket, a midnight-blue one-piece uniform outlines her
curves, the seven stars of the Pleiades blazoned across the swell of her
bosom, and she has a rocket pack slung over one shoulder in a tangle of
straps, counterbalanced by a satchel of spare 'platter' clips for the atomic
rifle dangling casually from her hand.
- She's alien, but not *too* alien, and quite definitely old enough despite
being only chin-high to a tall Martian. Stylishly short milk-chocolate hair
and long segmented antennae crown her cheerful round face, one lock curling
down into her wide moss-green eyes. Plates of strawberry-pink chitin armor
her shoulders and spine, and much of her long limbs, but the padding of her
spectacular curves is soft peaches-and-cream skin. Her costume is what Earth
girls wish they could wear: a scoop-necked Spandex halter and disintegrating
thigh-length cut-offs. A bright green button pinned to her halter announces,
- She stands graceful and poised as a classical statue, expression
composed and great dark eyes warmer than summer nights. Her face and
hands are delicate, pale as ivory, and unmarred by any touch of Helios.
Black silk and diamonds cling to her form and stream out on the wind,
glittering like the night sky in troubled water, and her blowing hair
shines like clouds before the moon. A quarter moon of pure and
tarnished silver rides on her bosom.
- A Harmony in four parts: a contralto, dark in brown leather and
crimson denim, black crew-cut bent over the lipstick-red bass in her
lap; a alto, long brown braids coiling down her bright summery dress of
sunrise yellow and orange, fingers deft on her golden guitar; a mezzo
soprano, tall and elegant in close-fitting jacket and trousers of
turquoise and sea green, auburn hair falling forward as she leans over
her drums; and a soprano in flowing violet robes and flowing platinum
hair, fiddle of white birchwood wailing under her chin.
- Brown hair spikes out in all directions around a pretty brown face
with mad brown eyes, pupils dilated in fascination at what they're
seeing (which doesn't seem to be what you're seeing). She's wearing a
straitjacket with shredded sleeves as a minidress, leaving her slim
brown legs bare except for a collection of hospital ID bracelets around
one ankle. On the back of the straitjacket is a large hand-made patch
with a North American Pinstriped Loon circled by the words 'DILUTE!
DILUTE! OK!', and a well-used fireaxe drags from one hand.
- This is the rare and curious Liralen, a nonesuch if there ever was
one. Certainly no other creature has hair so sleek and black, or
feathers so white and plumey, or a heart so bright and brave. Her
material form is like a lady of the Middle Kingdom, tall and graceful
and brilliant-eyed, clad in silk the color of a twilit sky, with white
feathers pouring down her back like a cloak; her spiritual form is a
bird of shining white, larger and fiercer than a tiger, with a black
and white sphere clutched in one talon.
- At first impression, his billowing black Cambridge gown, square
steel-rimmed glasses, and gold-clasped tail of Chinaman-black hair are
the very picture of academic eccentricity. The blue eyes behind the
lenses are sharp as cameras, though, in a cheerful face weathered brown
by strange suns, and the body beneath the clean but worn khaki bush
clothes is lean and hard. His many pockets are filled with implements
of science, and his hands bear the scars of over-enthusiastic
- Blazing crimson and carnelian feathers spill in elaborate disarry
around her porcelain face and down her back, like a mane of fire
against her somber clothes. Robes of coffee-on-black brocade loosely
wrap her maidenly form, white-rose flesh gleaming at throat and breast,
but below what should be knee-length skirts, her body trails away into
six yards of ash-white serpent, each scale fringed with crimson. Her
face is perfect as a Chinese doll's, only the barest hint of madness at
the edges of her dark-rimmed dark eyes and in the rapid flicker of
tonguetips between incarnadine lips.
- She has remarkably long hair for such a short person, and of a remarkably
unnatural shade of red that glows brightly against her plain white coat. The
sleeves of the straitjacket are rolled up to her elbows and serve as storage
for any number of pins, needles, spools of thread, and pairs of scissors, and
fabric of various colors, shapes, and states of assembly is clutched in her
hands. Her form is lost in the vastly oversized fit of her coat, and heavy
black stomping boots conceal her calves below the hem, but her face is pretty
in a maniacal sort of way.
The secondary hangout on TooMUSH, which I seem to have ended up
running through no virtue of my own, gets a new desc every couple
of months, or whenever inspiration wallops me.
- Huy Brazeal
- Fantastically twisted red branches and emerald leaves trace a
skeletal dome thirty miles around and five overhead, shielding air and
life from the blazing sun and glare-white lunar wastes outside
apparently by pure fiat. Within, unicorns and their hunting hounds
gambol across fields of head-high grass in pursuit of white stags,
gryphons flutter as nimbly as hummingbirds among misty castle-crowned
peaks, and mantichorae and jabberwocks lurk fire-eyed in dark tangled
woods. At the very center, the grandest tree of them all towers,
reaching to grasp the gibbous Earth in its citied branches.
- Volcanic Pools
- Precipices of vine-webbed black volcanic stone loom on every side,
gleaming with spray from the cascades of warm water. Mist from the
simmering pools rises toward a thumbnail of indigo sky where twisty red
branches five miles high bear stars like fruit. Soft beaches of black
sand and benches of smooth driftwood ring the pools both above and
below water, and flowered vines hang down like tapestries of sapphire,
emerald, and diamond.
- Secret Headquarters Zeta
- Shadows lurk in the corners of this huge deserted warehouse: the
shadows that cloud the minds of evildoers! In the middle of the cavernous
space, brightly lit by the spotlights of Justice, are the powerful
engines and complex machineries that support the Zeta Squad in the their
never-ending fight against the Malevolent Syndicate, as well as mementos
of their victories against the multifarious evils of mankind.
Supercomputers and electric cyborg polishers, global crime monitors and
fusion rechargers, all stand like bulwarks around the tower of awesome
potential that is The ZETATRON!
- On the Brink
- Neatly trimmed rosebushes and sculpted trees ring the smooth lawn,
setting the garden off from the half-wild forest on three sides. On the
fourth side the ground drops away sheer, leaving only empty air out to
the desert horizon and the sun's pyre. At the very edge, a bronze kraken
spouts water into a marble-edged pool, and the overflow pours out over
the cliff like a stream of blood. Opposite, in a topiary frame, a marble
satyr rampant stands with his pipes lowered, forever staring out over the
empty lands. In the very center of the garden, lit by swarming
will-o'-the-wisps, a septagonal wrought bronze table bears a feast served
by invisible hands.
- Gryphon Beach
- The white cliffs are carved into gryphons and nymphs, krakens and
merrows, the water pouting down over them shining like crystal in the
sunlight. Drifts of pale sand spread out beneath their feet, a smooth
carpet lightly ruffled by the wind and spotted with deep clear pools.
Water flows from one pool to the next until, reaching the white stone
serpent that encircles the beach, it escapes through the arch beneath
snout and tail and into unfathomable cerulean gulfs, sparkling like
diamonds beneath the southern sun.
A path of turquoise flagstones leads from steps descending the cliffs,
past a tumbled pile of boulders, to a violet pavilion pitched on the
highest dune, and then back to the other end of the cliff, terminating at
a cave beneath the writhing tail of a mermaid.
This may seem like a lot, but it's just the hilites from about three
years that I've been recording what I wrote, maybe a quarter of what
I have squirreled away.
This file was last modified at 1429 on 24Oct03 by email@example.com.